1
damp pile of limp balloons
2
multiple balloons, inflated to bursting
in January
let go on schedule until March
then all at once
sputtering
zip zoom
flail
hanging suspended in April
flop
3
you know how the house in Up floated away?
like that
but no passengers
4
some old-school blown-up balloons
along with helium mylar
and one miniature hot-air contraption
elaborately connected
mostly self-propelled
landing gently
grades turned in
5
damp pile of limp balloons
What metaphor are you aiming for? (I’m aiming for #4)
My favorite was #3.